Re: Bob Ate The Couch
Issachar, on host 38.30.10.114
Friday, January 14, 2000, at 09:42:58
Bob Ate The Couch posted by eric sleator on Thursday, January 13, 2000, at 16:39:00:
> This was originally intended to be a song, as is much of my stuff, so that's why it isn't the most poetic-looking poem. > > -eric "not based on a true story" sleator > Thu 13 Jan A.D. 2000 (not original date of poem)
"Bob Ate the Couch" is funny, but I still like your poem in Poetry Pool that's simply titled "Love" even better. I laughed long and hard over that one. Of course, I also laugh long and hard when I re-read my own older poetry, but for different reasons. :-)
Iss "make a rhyme every so often" achar
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