> > This was originally intended to be a song, as is much of my stuff, so that's why it isn't the most poetic-looking poem.
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> > -eric "not based on a true story" sleator
> > Thu 13 Jan A.D. 2000 (not original date of poem)
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> "Bob Ate the Couch" is funny, but I still like your poem in Poetry Pool that's simply titled "Love" even better. I laughed long and hard over that one. Of course, I also laugh long and hard when I re-read my own older poetry, but for different reasons. :-)
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> Iss "make a rhyme every so often" achar

"Love" was also originally written as a song. It also had a chorus in it every couple verses or so. The title was "Mushy Love Song".

-eric "thermomaniac" sleator
Fri 14 Jan A.D. 2000