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Re: Unpatriotic Draftdogers
Posted By: Matthew, on host 62.30.192.2
Date: Thursday, July 4, 2002, at 12:34:50
In Reply To: Re: Unpatriotic Draftdogers posted by Wes on Thursday, July 4, 2002, at 12:17:23:

> I wrote a little play. I hope you like it.
>

Hmm. I'm no theatre critic, but I'm willing to give it a try. I think your play is lacking a realism. Your central character, "Me," appears to be under some sort of brainwashing, positive propaganda about construction workers probably brought on by the success of The Village People. I can't see an audience identifying, to be honest.

Matthew

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