Wow...that was a very powerful poem, and also really sad. There was one part I didn't understand really, though. It was the part that said, "now toy with emotions true, but overflowing." Would it be possible for you to clear that line up for me? Other than that, I love that poem. Not to sound cliched, but it actually tugged at my heart, and not many poems do that. Some poems just have something special about them that I connect with, and this is one of them.

~Den-"loves the quote that says, 'better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you aren't'"Kara