Critical Analysis of 'Split Stephen,' by Keller, et al.
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In "Split Stephen," main character and primary author Stephen Keller portrays himself as, on the surface, a psychotic victim of multiple personality disorder. If we look deeper, however, we can discern Keller's underlying motive. In fact, through the use of hyperbole, metaphor, and symbolism, we can burrow beneath the deceptively simple dialogue and arrive at the core of his message: that, in actuality, we are all subject to -- or "victims of," if you will -- what is casually referred to as "multiple personality disorder" and that in fact this is not a disorder at all but a natural element of our human identity. No one is so shallow, Keller argues, that his or her personality can be unequivocally classified with a mere series of adjectives. Rather, our personalities are formulated by a mixture of tendencies: we have, within us all, conflicting urges. Illustrating this principle by using the overly simple paradigm Keller employs in "Split Stephen," we have an urge to be "good," in the classic sense, as well as an urge to be "bad," however much we might want to camouflage that urge and put forth the illusion that it doesn't exist. Furthermore, Keller illustrates, that if on occasion one of these conflicting urges overcomes the other, while at another time the second prevails, this is not an abnormal psychosis but a natural consequence of what it means to be human.
The subtext of "Split Stephen" becomes clear if we examine it closely enough and read between the lines. In the opening lines of the transcript, Keller (or "Stephen," as he ingenuously refers to himself) begins with a "hook" to draw the reader in. His first comment is deliberately misleading for dramatic effect. He says, "Could we please stop this hogwash? It's obvious that nobody in this chat except myself rules," but then, immediately afterward, adds, "The rest of you are FAR beyond sheer ruling." These opening lines serve four separate functions: dramatically, as a hook; as exposition, to establish the "good" urges within himself, which will become more manifest later; as foreshadowing, for the initial appearance of conflict in his perceptions of who is "ruling" and who is not is a subtle hint into the more overt conflict to follow; and as a clever, cutting remark against the ill-thought stereotypes held by the establishment: by "could we please stop all this hogwash?" Keller is, besides addressing the immediate concerns of the conversation, opening his satirical illustration with a plea that it be listened to, taken to heart, and adopted. Hogwash, indeed, is it that individuals are expected to exist without inner conflict and considered mentally disabled if they fall short of those expectations.
What follows as an aside, but it's an aside so interesting, an entire paper could be written on it, and this one would be incomplete without giving it due mention. Keller argues, "Language is but a container, holding back the true wonder that are the people of this chat." It's an excellent metaphor to describe a metaphysical observation, and yet it inherently defies itself: by condemning language as an inhibitor of understanding, the metaphor, since it also uses language, becomes a paradox. The word "paradox" is used with great care, here, for the metaphor is not a contradiction but an apparent contradiction. In actuality, the deliberate use of language to show how language does an injustice to greater truths, Keller makes his metaphor all the more convincing: if the metaphor is a crippled illustration of its point, so much the greater must the truth that it conveys actually be.
But what does it mean? If language is a container, it must contain something. What does it contain? Keller tells us plainly: the true wonder that are the people of this chat. Normally, containers collect and preserve the integrity and completeness of something for us to employ as we need or wish, but Keller very carefully uses the word "back": "language is but a container, holding BACK the true wonder...." And so we learn that our realm of accessibility is not in a closed system, not in a limited area of which we have control, but in the immeasurable reaches of the metaphysical universe that we cannot control at all. Anything controlled or "contained" is, by definition, beyond our grasp to experience and understand meaningfully.
Keller gets back on track when he says, "I'm worthless scum, merely stating what's painfully obvious." We will learn later that Keller is currently allowing his "good" urges to prevail, and so we gather that humility, even self-abasement, is considered a favorable quality.
It is, in fact, a PURELY "good" quality. Keller is portraying himself as utterly lacking in conflicting tendencies. In this version of himself, good has at last triumphed over evil and vanquished it once and for all. Shouldn't this be cause for great cheer and rejoicing? The perpetual human struggle against moral depravity is won! Alas, though it is a bit of a shock, this is not at all the response. Instead of satisfaction and jubilation, the reactions of Keller's peers are of disquiet, fear, and suspicion. Sakura writes, "This is scaring me." Brunnen-G, when confronted with the possibility that this is the way Keller has truly changed, says she "hopes not" and "couldn't stand" it. Liface writes, "Whoa, it's almost like me not making typo's [sic]." Only Nyperold admits that he "thinks this is an improvement"; on the whole, the reactions are unsettled, in recognition of an undesirable straying from the comfort of the norm upon which we invest our securities. The deviation is too much for some to take. Kiki bursts, "ARRRUGHHH!!!!! I WANT EVIL PSYCHO STEPHEN OF DOOM BACK!!!!" overreacting against the discomfort. Why is the reception of a purely "good" Keller so adverse? It's clear that Keller's companions sense the falseness of his humanity. Now lacking conflict within himself, he is somehow less than human. It is curious to note and ponder that, Keller argues, while it may be human to fight the war against evil, it's not at all human to win it.
The premise of the transcript thus established, the story develops naturally until the first plot point, where a heart operation triggers an emotional change. Keller's "bad" tendency returns, personified as a separate entity, and, just as we have been permitted to experience Keller without his "bad" tendencies, now we can experience him without the "good" tendencies and compare and contrast the two. "[The baby] would look much better with its insides on your head!" Keller exclaims after his bad tendencies return but haven't yet burst free. Keller employs an efficient means by which to portray his darker side. As wanting to put a baby's entrails upon another's head is commonly considered to be a "bad" urge, we instantly pick up on the subtle change in Keller's personality. The emerging dominance of his darker half is then illustrated all the more plainly when he writes, "I WILL FREAKING RIP OFF YOUR HEADS and give you roses and hugs!!!!!" Here Keller relies on the audience already understanding that roses and hugs are "good" things, and ripping off people's heads is a "bad" thing. Assuming his readers connect with this understanding, Keller subtlely establishes something else in the careful manner of his phrasing: capital letters are introduced as a symbol for evil, whereas mixed case remain indicative of more noble aspirations. Thereafter, Keller uses upper case for evil and mixed case for good. This layer of symbolism makes his depiction of his conflicted inner nature all the more compelling.
Let us examine the first words from each half of Keller's personality, after it ruptures, yielding two separate, unconflicted entities. "I have survived," the good side of Keller says. "I'VE WON!" the bad side of Keller says. (At first, each side thinks the other was destroyed.) The "good" side glories in survival; the bad side -- note the capital letters -- glories in conquest. From that moment, each half -- the good side meekly, the bad side overconfidently -- vies for the upper hand. In the end, the bad side wins, marking this episode a tragedy rather than comedy. What was the tragic flaw that enabled the good side of Keller to be vanquished? Like all tragic flaws in all the great tragic heroes of literature, it was a flaw inherent in his humanity, and the nature of his flaw is worked into Keller's underlying theme: since it is indeed a flaw embedded deeply in human nature, the key to resolving this flaw in all of us is not to seek to fix it but to seek to cope with it.
Keller's demise is engendered by the actions of Darius Longshore, who, here, symbolizes one of many oppressing factions of society. In particular, Longshore stands for those who seek to deny the natural presence of conflict in the human spirit by refusing to acknowledge competing tendencies. "THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS A GOOD STEPHEN," Longshore asserts, and we know that this is a deception because it is expressed in capital letters, which have already been established as symbolizing evil. To illustrate the capriciousness of the determination he makes about which half exists and which doesn't, he acts oppositely toward a supporting character, which serves as a foil, a handy point of comparison, for Keller: "THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS A BAD BRUNNEN-G," Longshore proclaims. It is not the particular sides Longshore is taking that matters, merely that he is taking sides at all. Longshore, symbolizing what Keller would call a misled and harmful faction of mainstream society, oppressively adheres to inaccurate conceptions of the nature of humanity and thereby destroys the essence of humanity in enforcing the appearance of those misconceptions around him. For when Longshore makes these proclamations, the effect is devastating. "That can't be true!" the good side of Keller gasps desperately, before he "crumbles" and withers away into nothing, leaving the bad side of Keller to emerge victorious. The error of Longshore's ways is seen too late: "LONGSHORE, I COMMEND YOU ON YOUR CLEVER THINKING. ALAS, I MUST NOW KILL YOU," the bad side of Keller announces.
Unfortunately, like many populist commercial ventures, pressure from studios and publicists, apprehensive about the commercial viability of Keller's artistry realized purely, have blemished the integrity of Keller's work by tacking on an artificial happy ending. The ending involves some absurdity about sacred artifacts and their psycho-spiritual power, which is used as a deus ex machina to conquer the bad side of Stephen, which, lacking conflicting "good" tendencies, would have otherwise been an essentially unstoppable force of evil thenceforth. Since this ending is not consistent with Keller's vision, it is not fruitful to give it more than a passing anecdotal mention.
At any rate, the drama illustrates Keller's wake-up call convincingly. Neither his "good" self nor his "bad" self is truly human; it is the combination of both, moderating each other, that comprises the fullness of his humanity. Yet society, inasmuch as it would (and did) attack either side alone, would also attack the two together, mistakenly assuming that a conflicted human spirit is an abnormal entity. But how else can good abide with evil but uneasily? What makes us content in our humanity, Keller insists, is to acknowledge that conflicting tendencies exist, so that we may progress beyond that and learn how we might moderate and temper these aspects of our being. Good vs. evil, of course, is only one example of many conflicting pairs of tendencies in each of us, which begs the question, what enormousness of harmful denial must we adopt to pretend they don't or shouldn't exist? What damage have we already done to ourselves, and how much more might we inflict if we do not change our way of thinking? These questions are those inevitably posed by the assertions Keller makes in "Split Stephen." Like all good art, it makes meaningful statements and observations and invites us to make more.
Bibliography:
'Split Stephen,' by Stephen Keller, et al., (c) 2000.
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