> > > > This is a story I wrote. I like my story. Any comments anyone has on it are welcome, though. So, um, yeah.
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> > > This is a good story, with strong, clean language and, as others have said, a good ending. Write more! Post it!
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> > > Tom
> > > tmschm@wm.edu
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> > All I've written otehr than that is poetry... and if you want to read that, here's the link. I need to add some more poems to that... (mine are the ones by Lynette Yorgey)
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> > uni"wrote a couple today"peg
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> Those are really good. You are a great writer. I loved 'Lemons'. Really profound. Also, I really loved 'Please'. That one is exactly the feelings I have towards someone. It's almost like you saw inside my head. I'd love to put that on my web page with credit to you. If that's ok, then let me know and I will.
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> famous

I guess it makes sense that the ones that are you people's favorites are the ones that aren't actually applicable to a certain situation in my life... I mean, I like all of my poems up there, but my favorite, I think, is "Ten", as well as a couple more that I haven't put up there yet but am going to, because they all apply to one or another very important event in my life. But yes, feel free to use "Please" as well as any other one you want to use.

uni"going to go and read my poems again"peg