> > > This is a story I wrote. I like my story. Any comments anyone has on it are welcome, though. So, um, yeah.
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> > This is a good story, with strong, clean language and, as others have said, a good ending. Write more! Post it!
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> > Tom
> > tmschm@wm.edu
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> All I've written otehr than that is poetry... and if you want to read that, here's the link. I need to add some more poems to that... (mine are the ones by Lynette Yorgey)
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> uni"wrote a couple today"peg

Those are really good. You are a great writer. I loved 'Lemons'. Really profound. Also, I really loved 'Please'. That one is exactly the feelings I have towards someone. It's almost like you saw inside my head. I'd love to put that on my web page with credit to you. If that's ok, then let me know and I will.

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