> > > > This is a story I wrote. I like my story. Any comments anyone has on it are welcome, though. So, um, yeah.
> > >
> > >
> > > This is a good story, with strong, clean language and, as others have said, a good ending. Write more! Post it!
> > >
> > > Tom
> > > tmschm@wm.edu
> >
> > All I've written otehr than that is poetry... and if you want to read that, here's the link. I need to add some more poems to that... (mine are the ones by Lynette Yorgey)
> >
> > uni"wrote a couple today"peg
>
> Beautiful. I can almost hear you(?) reading them.
>
> Nyperold

Thank you.... and I really want to know what me inside your head sounds like. hmmmm...

uni"are we back to that what am i like in your head thing again?"peg