> > > This is a story I wrote. I like my story. Any comments anyone has on it are welcome, though. So, um, yeah.
> >
> >
> > This is a good story, with strong, clean language and, as others have said, a good ending. Write more! Post it!
> >
> > Tom
> > tmschm@wm.edu
>
> All I've written otehr than that is poetry... and if you want to read that, here's the link. I need to add some more poems to that... (mine are the ones by Lynette Yorgey)
>
> uni"wrote a couple today"peg

Beautiful. I can almost hear you(?) reading them.

Nyperold