I wrote a poem, though I'm not a poet (I think this is the first actual poem I've written). It's inspired by an idea from Revelation 21. Let me know your thoughts. I have some explanation and information I can give for it, but I'll let you read it and react to it first. The Rinkforum destroys the formatting if I copy and paste, so I put it on my livejournal (this is the first and probably the last post I'll put on there since I use it exclusively for commenting, so you probably don't need to bookmark it).

Let me know any thoughts, reactions, comments, critiques. I'm more interested in hearing your thoughts and reactions to it than your critiques, but I welcome those also.