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> Uh oh. May i ask which parts in the middle you thought dragged? The reason I ask is because there is a particularly fun part (well, fun to write, anyway) in the middle that I am inordinately proud of, and if that's the part you thought dragged, I'm going to have to go sit in the corner and cry.

Uh, hate to dissapoint, but I'm not sure. Maybe it was just the fact that I read the thing in one sitting, and got sort of tired towards the middle. Upon thinking about it, I can't remember any specific part that was bad, so maybe it was just me... What part are you so proud of? Let me know, and I'll tell you if I thought it was dull or not...