I like it, but it's a bit long for a MAM. Here's my suggested edit:


Ferris (Matthew Broderick)

I'm faking sick, so I can stay home.

(FERRIS goes into the city of CHICAGO and has wacky ADVENTURES with his FRIENDS)

Mr. Rooney (Jeffrey Jones) and Jeanie Bueller (Jennifer Grey)

That @#$%$@. I hate him. He's faking, and I'll prove it.

(Mr. Rooney gets attacked by a DOG, and Jeanie gets ARRESTED.)

THE END

Ferris

The movie's over! Go home!

Well, I think my version's still kind of long. But otherwise it's good :)