>> One of the few criticisms I personally have
>>about this story is that it's not really much of
>> an SF story--it's just the story of a guy in an
>>SF world.
>
> Can't be that much of a problem; Bradbury's of
>the recognised masters of the genre, and all his
>stories are like that.
>
> Paul

Yeah, but unfortunately I'm not Bradbury.

But I'm not too concerned about the issue. I still think TMH is one of my best short stories--and I actually think more of it now than I did before I posted it for everyone to read.