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Re: Poem
Posted By: Liz, on host 139.222.128.2
Date: Saturday, November 24, 2001, at 06:39:03
In Reply To: Re: Poem posted by Bourne on Friday, November 23, 2001, at 00:44:20:

> I think its a lovely poem.
>
> And thats all I'm going to say, really, apart from giving you one to mull over...
>
> "She stood upon the bridge that night,
> Her lips were all a-quiver.
> She gave a cough,
> Her head fell off,
> And floated down the river."


Wow, like beautiful man, that really touched me. In return, I'd like you to maybe consider these...

"A naughty fairy came last night when no-one was about,
She set my Christmas tree alight and wouldn't put it out,
Now had it been just any tree, I wouldn't really care,
But it was made of PVC and melted everywhere."

"Thanks for laying the carpet Dad,
Thanks for showing us how.
But what's that lump in the middle Dad?
And why's it saying miaow?"

Liz"I'm a poet and I don't know it"zie
xxx

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