I agree with Nyperold, and i don't really have anything to add about your poems. I'd just like to say that your talent has really amazed and disgusted me since i've been in forum (my own poems are mostly crap and incomplete ideas).

But after reading these two yesterday, i told myself, "Dang it, i've got to write some new stuff or these darn kids are gonna leave me in the dust." But i never wrote any poetry last night.

Penny*i did, however, play guitar for about three hours and came up with some neat chord progressions for some new songs, so thanx for the inspiration!*stamp