Re: Poem
Issachar, on host 207.30.27.2
Monday, January 22, 2001, at 08:54:43
Poem posted by Kiki on Sunday, January 21, 2001, at 19:25:09:
> Dreams > Fairy-tale > Cotton candy > Clouds > Spun from my fingers > As I whirled > Twirled > Mirror to mirror > Kaleidoscoping > Into myriad maybes > Enclosed > Pirouette > Echoes > Wall Ceiling Floor Wall > Alone. > Fingers curl > Hesitate > Flick > Glass crumbles > Prismed endlessly > For an instant > Silver piles of dreams > Cascade around through down > Shoulders Eyes Ears > Heart. > Alone. > Softly swirling > Possibilities > Shower softly > And even here > There are roses. > > Kiki
Gawd, what a stinker! I mean, this is just plain AWFUL. You call this poetry??! This bit of drivel, all by itself, is concrete evidence of the decline of Western culture, IMHO. Please, if you *must* pen such atrocities, at least have the decency to keep them to yourself rather than emblazoning them upon the eyeballs of unsuspecting citizens of good taste.
Iss " ;-) " achar
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