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Re: Poem
Posted By: Issachar, on host 207.30.27.2
Date: Monday, January 22, 2001, at 08:54:43
In Reply To: Poem posted by Kiki on Sunday, January 21, 2001, at 19:25:09:

> Dreams
> Fairy-tale
> Cotton candy
> Clouds
> Spun from my fingers
> As I whirled
> Twirled
> Mirror to mirror
> Kaleidoscoping
> Into myriad maybes
> Enclosed
> Pirouette
> Echoes
> Wall Ceiling Floor Wall
> Alone.
> Fingers curl
> Hesitate
> Flick
> Glass crumbles
> Prismed endlessly
> For an instant
> Silver piles of dreams
> Cascade around through down
> Shoulders Eyes Ears
> Heart.
> Alone.
> Softly swirling
> Possibilities
> Shower softly
> And even here
> There are roses.
>
> Kiki

Gawd, what a stinker! I mean, this is just plain AWFUL. You call this poetry??! This bit of drivel, all by itself, is concrete evidence of the decline of Western culture, IMHO. Please, if you *must* pen such atrocities, at least have the decency to keep them to yourself rather than emblazoning them upon the eyeballs of unsuspecting citizens of good taste.

Iss " ;-) " achar