> > This is a story I wrote. I like my story. Any comments anyone has on it are welcome, though. So, um, yeah.
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> Um, wow. That was really good. I just found this through the link in "The Revenge of Sam" and I'm glad I took the time to come read it. Kiki, you are REALLY good. I'm going to have to make a point of going to read some of your poetry now. By the way, most of the reason for this response is so that more people (maybe newer people) will get a chance to read the story, and so I can find it again easily, because I want to read it again. I guess that's about all I want to say right now. Thanks for posting this. :-)
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> Don

Thank you, and you're welcome... I still maintain that this story was a fluke. I'd never written a short story like it, and I haven't since. So this story, at least, isn't typical. My poetry, on the other hand...

Ki"I allow myself a bit of pride over that"ki